IELTS Writing: 1 Số Cách Viết Câu Gãy Gọn

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DIỄN ĐẠT CÂU CÓ NGHĨA SAU KHI ĐỌC HIỂU & CHỌN LỌC THÔNG TIN TRONG IELTS WRITING

TIP 01: HẠN CHẾ VIẾT CÂU ĐƠN VÀ DIỄN ĐẠT CÂU GHÉP, NỐI CÂU HỢP LÝ

THE BENEFIT OF ONLINE SHOPPING

[BÀI VIẾT CỦA HV 4.0-5.0] Secondly, online shopping can affect people’s lifestyles. People may spend less time going out, which can lead to a lack of social interaction. This can contribute to feelings of isolation and even health problems like depression and obesity. As a result, online shopping can lead to a more sedentary and isolated lifestyle.

=> Secondly, over-reliance on online shopping || can cause many people to spend less time going out, thus leading to their lack of social interaction with others as well as their adoption of a sedentary lifestyle. As a result, this tendency || can cause online shoppers to suffer from a sense of isolation and health problems such as obesity.

TIP 02: KHÔNG VIẾT INFORMAL LANGUAGE, KHÔNG DÙNG “YOU” TRONG BÀI // BIẾN MỘT CÂU THÀNH MỘT VẾ (MỘT CỤM DANH TỪ)

[informal language] Secondly, using online shopping apps allows you to compare prices and offerings from different stores easily. This can help you find the best deals and save money compared to traditional in-store shopping.

=> Secondly, online shopping platforms || can enable people to easily compare prices from different stores; therefore, they can find the best deals and save more money compared to traditional in-store shopping. 

=> Secondly, by easily comparing prices from different stores on e-commerce platforms, shoppers || can find better deals and save more money compared to traditional shopping. 

TIP 03: CHỌN LỌC THÔNG TIN QUAN TRỌNG, KHÔNG VIẾT THÔNG TIN THỪA

Another perk related to the significant increase in online shoppers is improving employment opportunities. Many shipping express companies hire a huge number of delivery men, for the demand shipping of buyers is greatly increasing. Moreover, it is important for deliveries can earn a decent living. As well as, the appearance of more self-employed stores based on the Internet. So it can stimulate local economic growth. 

=> Such a trend || can create more job opportunities for semi-skilled and unskilled workers, thus helping them to earn a living and stimulating national economic growth

Another concern is related to clients not being able to physically see products. To be more specific, consumers might not try products before they purchase them, for items are often photo-shopped. In other words, those things are more appealing and look quality by pictures. Therefore, shoppers can get scammed with low-quality purchases. Eventually, it is the main reason that leads to consumers’ disappointment feeling.

=> Another concern is that a lack of chances to check the quality of products in person might cause online buyers to be deceived by photoshopped photos and over-exaggerated descriptions of products. In this way, many would be scammed to buy low-quality items, thus leading to their strong disappointment feelings.

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